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    Post by lonewolvernsoul Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:52 pm

    Name: Elliot Keelan
    Nick Names: "Elli" is fine.

    Gender: Female
    Race: Shinigami
    Allegiance: Domei, Squad 13
    Birthday: Oct. 28
    Physical Age: 19
    Spiritual Age: 193
    Sexual Orientation: Bisexual


    Appearance:
    Elliot is about 5'5", her thick brownish-red hair is long enough to do whatever she likes with it, and her eyes are a mix between stone grey and green, and her skin is a warm peach. All of her facial features are soft and smooth, right down to her cherry pink lips. Her slender body curves with full maturity making an hourglass shape, completed with a B-sized chest.

    Clothing:
    When off the job and out doing something, Elliot could be found in age appropiate clothing with some gothic themes thrown in. However, her primary outfit was somewhat complicated.
    Keelan, Elliot Dress%20katana%20weapons%20anime%20girls%202200x1378%20wallpaper_www.wall321.com_32

    Accessories:
    She wears thigh high black lace stockings and polished red flats on her feet. In her hair she wears one of many ornemets so that life isn't boring. For jewelry she had an assortment of bracelets and earrings that fit the three in her lower ears, but she was always wearing a simple neclace with a heart shaped charm on it, along with a metal tag branded with the kanji for love.

    Personality:
    Elliot rarely seems to be bothered by anything, it usually is a violent reaction when it does. Being as social as she was, she could spark up a conversation with just about anyone with little effort. Elliot is playful, friendly, and sometimes flirty, all around she's pretty charismatic. Observant, and empathetic, Elliot picks up on little things in conversations mainly, but also in battle.
    Elliot is detached, and keeps to herself, only ever needing company occasionally but never regularly. Ambitious Elliot is not. She got her position by doing her job, nothing much else.

    History:
    Elliot was born in the hills of Ireland and spend the first half of her child on her parents farm. An unfortunate accident left her without either parent and she was put up with her grandparents in the city. The rest of her child hood and pre-teens she spent in that hard part of a big city. She was welcomed into a gang of thieves and spent most of her pre-teen life stacking up a rap sheet. One night, at the age of 14, her parents got a call from the cops. After a few months in juvie, and the beating of her life by her grandfather (who was stronger than he looked) she was shipped to an all girl's school in Japan. For the next three years she spend the day in school, the evening forced to learn to be a proper lady, and the night from 7pm to 11pm doing whatever she felt like before the mandatory bed time. One night she went out to a bar, and even though she was barely 17 they gave her the alchol cause of how old she acted. Then out of the corner of her eye she caught the sight of a patch from an old rival gang-member. The chances of that was crazy, but what was insane was that she knew the guy. That night... She died.
    But with her death came a new life. And she was brought to the Soul Society Acedemy and was taught a whole new set of skills. These she was actualy going to use. During her school early school life she met a guy. He was and he was the love of her life. But life was not less cruel because she was dead.. Nathan's demise came harshly and left Elliot broken. Grieveing took her out of a lot of the experience and eventually she was transferred. She was landed in Squad 13 where she eventually moved up the ladder of power. It wasn't easy to accept the truce, after all the Hollows were what killed Nathan.. But for now she was where she was.

    Likes: Reading, red, conversation, and flirting.
    Dislikes: Being told what to do.
    Hobbies: Elliot was perfectly content with reading her free time away, be it novels, manga, magazines, or text books. She enjoys keeping her mind tuned.
    Strengths:
    -Flexible in and out of combat, making her hard to corner.
    -Light on her feet and a master at dodging.
    Weaknesses:
    -She lacked a strong defense other than the ability to dodge.

    General Abilities:

    Her gang life gave her both decent hand-to-hand skills and the ability to pick a pocket expertly.

    She is extreamly good at bluffing as well, thanks to her not so legal activities.

    With free time to spare, Elliots become master with her sword.
    Moves she's really good at:

    ~Ceart Tríd an Chroí (Right Through the Heart)
    In a gust of speed Elliot lunges forward and aims for a death kill, straight into the chest of her target.

    ~Lashing Out
    Mo Chroi breaks into a chain sword and Elliot makes 13 swift attacks on the unfortunate victum. Depending on how close the target is depends on how severe the attacks are.


    Mo Chroi (My Heart)

    ~Zanpakutou: Sealed~

    Zanpakutou: Sealed Appearance: A tonto sword, but not your average tonto. It had a pink and purple handle that lead to a heat shaped guard, which was its own work of art. The blade was a sharp blade that ended abruptly in a flat tip, just angeled enough to make a point. The metal was pink with heart shaped holes that get smaller from the base to half way up the blade, just before it makes a sharp angle downward angel and then continues to the full length of 18 inches from hilt to point. Dangling from the handle was a purple tassle, if you get close enough it you can see a tiny arrow charm on the end.



    ~Zanpakutou: Shikai~

    Release Phrase: Breaking Mo Chroi!
    Zanpakutou: Shikai Appearance: Mo Chroi's blade becomes thicker and heavier until the tonto looks like a more weatern styled sword. The Hilt is now made of royal purple leather, the tassle beomes a long chain with a pointed arrow at the tip, and the blade curves downward instead of that hard line the sword made before. The metal was blood red, the hearts were bigger, and the sharp part of the blade was almost a souless black which no shine. The guard was still the heart from before but looked aged and twisted up and down in a longer curve. In the sides it looked like the blade was cracked, but in reality they were breaks, for this sword was a chain sword, released when Elliot wishes.


    Shikai Abilities:

    ~Ice Crown
    Mo Chori is arched over Elliot who aims for a target within range. If the attack misses the target and hits the ground instead, large ice spikes jump up from the ground in the immediate area of 15 feet in an attempt to pierce through the fleeing target.
    Drawback: Besides potential death traps for herself? Minor Spritaul energy loss.

    ~Cold Steel
    A thin sheet of ice forms on the blade so that when she cuts her oppunet ice crystals are left in the wound. The ice cystals then spread through out the body from the wound, freezing parts right off the body.
    Drawback: Cold still has to be fed Spritual Energy for the whole duration of the effect. With a weak upkeep she can endure it for 10 minutes, but she hopes to never need it for that long.


    ~Zanpakutou: Bankai~ -{Currently Unknown}-

    Summon Phrase: w.i.p.
    Zanpakutou: Bankai Appearance: Elliot lets Mo Chroi go and it starts to spin, faster and faster, until the blade suddenly shatters into pieces. The shards start to swirl around her, forming into wings made from light pink and blood red crystals while her chain and hilt take on a new form: A whip with a longer reach.
    Spoiler:

    Bankai Abilities:

    Shikai ability increase
    Increase power on shikai abilities

    ~Crystal Rain
    Elliot stretches out her wings, and forces shards to rain down on her target. As the shards hurl towards the targeted area at increasing speeds due to gravity, they grow bigger and bigger. Depending on how high up she is, they get harder to dodge.




    RP Sample - Elliots Death

    Elliot stares into the sky from where she was, her back arched over a mound of snow that was quickly turning red with blood. Her eyes reflected no light, because the day was dying in the background along with her leaving an already dark sky darker. She wordlessly watches as snow drifts down from the sky, thick clumps of flakes that floated like feathers, swaying back and forth. Beyond that were dark storm clouds that hid the full moon.

    Her body was sprawled out like a discarded doll, her red hair now wet with ice cold water from the snow that melted with the last of her body heat. She was wearing a thin white top, you could see the red bra under it. Over that was a light grey hooded sweater, and then a slightly thicker black coat with some cartoon like skulls on it. She wore a red, pink, and white plaid skirt over some black leggings and on her feet were black sneakers with white random dots to look like a clear night's sky. Her cherry pink lips now had a blue undertone, and her body was stiff and already cold.

    Elliot might have yelled for help if she thought it would do her any good, but instead she takes her death unnervingly calmly. She didn't regret anything, she didn't hate, she was only surprised that he actually got the better of her. She only wished she could have seen Ireland again..

    "I hear its beautiful there." A voice sounds behind the girl who looked much like the one on the ground, in fact, she looked exactally like the one on the ground. It was Elliot after all, her spirit watching over her body. She turns to see a Shinigami standing in white and black robes, and as the sirens call out in the quiet night, he offers her a gentle smile and his hand. Elliot could only take it and be lead far far from here.


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    Outfit: Source Link, VY1 Mizki from Vocalliod.
    Bankai: Source Link, Crino (Can't find where she's from...)


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    Post by Tsukimi Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:34 pm

    Declined until further notice, my apologies!
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    Post by lonewolvernsoul Sat Apr 27, 2013 3:23 am

    plan on changing her last name, and my bankai's release is still WiP, but its been edited some.
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    Post by Grimmjow Mon Apr 29, 2013 10:47 pm

    A immediate needs to be defined as a specific range
    Shaiki second and third attacks are sword techniques not abilities


    Bankai ability is okay but it would be easy to dodge because of the height and wing span.

    and age is way to low to have learned Bankai (I don't care that Ichigo did it he's different.)
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